BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

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BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Onestophiphop on Mon Mar 19, 2012 10:22 pm





Im bout to sting you like scorpion,
Inject that death poison like Kevorkian,
His mama should have abortioned him,
Look at his portrait, his face is disproportionate,
Now theres your motherfuckin metomorphosis,
You claim to be the king, im takin over fortresses,
You better bow down, like when you cock worshipin,
TKO style, I never learned that sportsmanship,
No homo, this fag give head to the horsemen quick,
Beatin up this pussy like a tortured clit,
Call this shit rape like I forced it in,
Keep duckin me man cuz you know you really cant win,
You better stand back and take punch lines to your damn chin,
Nobody stand behind em,
Imma hit you like a car crash your grill need alignment,
Start callin you your heiness,
You got it all wrong like 2 boys 69n,
Imma beat yo ass lifeless, R.I.P. Ckrisis

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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Ill Humor on Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:05 am

oh no.. not mentioning the man's online battle record. did i set my time machine for 2003?

you know.. this does make a good battle beat... lyrics are decent... i get the personals a little since i know who he's dissing... that flow is ehh.. the whole delivery is a bit off.. aint rapping very clear either but.. its a decent diss... lol brian's shit just started lol.. didnt even need to look, grimmey ass rapping lol..


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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Onestophiphop on Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:34 am

word lol, I didnt really have alot of personals, i just wanted to go in on the beat, Thats generally how i rap tho, prolly coulda been a bit better, but i usually just one take stuff, sometimes i go over it a few times, Its hard tho cuz i dont write alot, I just freestyle over beats until i get a full verse memorized that flows decent, Thanks for checkin it out tho, One

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Post by Ill Humor on Tue Mar 20, 2012 1:17 pm

well it might not be "personals" but its more than i hear nowadays.. you can tell your actually talking about him from the references and such.

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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Onestophiphop on Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:08 am

No Doubt, If you ever wanna collab beat or track let me know, this is far from my best work but its not terrible just off in a few spots, ima go back to writing the stuff down, that way i get more from the tracks, Thanks again man

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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by philosopha on Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:34 am

yo r u n Ckrisis beefin?
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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Onestophiphop on Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:53 pm

No, This is just a warmup more or less for a upcoming battle and its been awhile since i dropped anything, So i decided to make this

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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by philosopha on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:56 pm

o ok dope
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Re: BlackSuits and Churchbells (diss track)

Post by Kin on Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:27 pm

I was diggin' thiz...beatz hard...Voice is nice...

flow is straight only complaint is wit' da delivery on thiz...some pauses in da middle of lines where it seemed like it should of been at da end of tha bars instead...or wordz added into the lines to smooth this out...

but for a quick lil' diss thiz was Hotness

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