Coleon Vs. RawInk
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Coleon Vs. RawInk
This is your battlethread gentlemen, Please Refer to Round1 Rules for the guidelines and lets get it on.
Last edited by Onestophiphop on Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:38 am; edited 2 times in total
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
Lets GO!
So you're a gangsta' now huh?
Trying to aim for the game, and a famous outcome.
But I'll state it now bruh, you ain't taking out nuh.
Cause I'm in the way of your second round run.
Now don't you sound dumb.
Who is this kid with a monikor, obnoxious.
I'll have more of a challenge if I'm out shadow boxing.
That's all nonsense, your status isn't pro.
You're a comedians facebook, your status is a joke.
Took the R out your name, Coleon I had to laugh.
Makes sense since being haRd is what you never had.
You're far from a thug, you wont ever swing first
And when you hold a PEACE/PIECE you're sticking up to fingers
No need to see his best this bitch, needs more presense
His weak attempts get will get zero mentions
This isn't fair you need to bring evil henchmen
Before this PUSSY hits the gym he does kegal stretches
Trying to aim for the game, and a famous outcome.
But I'll state it now bruh, you ain't taking out nuh.
Cause I'm in the way of your second round run.
Now don't you sound dumb.
Who is this kid with a monikor, obnoxious.
I'll have more of a challenge if I'm out shadow boxing.
That's all nonsense, your status isn't pro.
You're a comedians facebook, your status is a joke.
Took the R out your name, Coleon I had to laugh.
Makes sense since being haRd is what you never had.
You're far from a thug, you wont ever swing first
And when you hold a PEACE/PIECE you're sticking up to fingers
No need to see his best this bitch, needs more presense
His weak attempts get will get zero mentions
This isn't fair you need to bring evil henchmen
Before this PUSSY hits the gym he does kegal stretches
rawink- Posts : 18
Join date : 2012-02-25
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
Rawink's drop was pretty dope. Some good punchlines and good lyrics but your flow was kinda off bro. Good entry though!
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
Daaammmn, I like this Rawink your sick homie, your flow remind me of old school outkast, Props on this shit
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
"You're a comedians facebook, your status is a joke." Very Dope Line!
Slayer- Posts : 3
Join date : 2012-03-07
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
pretty dope had a bit of word play, good flow
cant wait to hear what other dudes got
cant wait to hear what other dudes got
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
fridaymusic wrote:but your flow was kinda off bro. Good entry though!
That was the point. It was a mellow beat so I wanted a flow with a slow drawl. It actually was kind of a pain in the ass to not hit every snare and kick on time haha. Thanks for checking it out though.
Hopefully this battle gets underway.
rawink- Posts : 18
Join date : 2012-02-25
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
Rawink you move to the next round because of DQ, I hate to see it happen like that cuz you brought it, but props
Re: Coleon Vs. RawInk
Rawink was hella chill and dope lol nice beat choice Yea man I just saw ya post on my battle just now I feel ya man I was tryin to have fun like you did here too. good luck on on ya next battle homie
philosopha- Posts : 74
Join date : 2012-02-25
Age : 32
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