Yames Payaso vs The Rappist (Mr. Morder)

Here is your battle thread gentlemen, Please Refer to the Round 1 Battle Rules for the guidelines, Let get it in!

my verse is pretty much finished, am i suposed to wait to drop it until my opponet is finished or what

I'm ready to upload my track...let's do this...

@Yames- Upload when you ready bro, ONe

http://www.divshare.com/download/16953503-9e7
One Rapper To Rule Them All



[The fate of the world rest upon one small emcees shouders, ever locked in a fierce battle of life and death
Only he can stop to the forces of Morder from rising,
but is he no but man, will he have the strength to prevail in such a task
or shall he perish, and with him all of the world]

It only takes rapper to rule them all/
all the fakes get removed im abusive and raw/
bitches get no respect thats a rule and a law/
I'm hot like a volcano and you warm like a spa/
You don't want it widda hobbit that be schooled in the force/
murder you first me you second hope you ready for war/
might be chillin widda horde but im slayin you whores/
you sound rapsy and hoarse and you could pass for an orc/
You fake and you ain't sick dude you got face it/
everything you doin' im labelin it as basic/
the only way a nigga get the pussy you got to take it/
you claim you be a rappist but really you just a rapist/
I'll slap your face til youre tastless/
Form swarms around you storm where your gate is/
Mr. Morder your herse is waitin'/
More dirt for your grave you meet Satan/

good luck dude

oh and i got a kick out of that Great White North line, im from alaska haha

TheRappists wrote:www.divshare.com/download/16951781-2bc

you should post your lyrics too, its kinda hard to understand you near the end

I just checked out both of these, nice work Fellaz, Solid Complete Battle For Round 1, Again I encourage you guys to share this and have people drop comments, The Votes will be cast by Saturday, One will move on, and Rd 2 bracket will be up Sunday!

Nice.
I like the orc reference.
Here's my lyrics...

Don't call me Morder without the "Mr.", performing lyrical tongue twisters,
contorting until I grow blisters to force you to kiss dirt in your sissy skirt,
stretching your sphincter with words and leaving you feeling sick and impure.
Attacking you from The Great White North with this eight times four
divided by two provided that you stay conscious
let alone alive all the way through,
sometimes it's fun to cut slow and methodical then out of nowhere
tear without a care filling the air with death and despair.
It's the randomness that makes you not able to handle this,
and know that I can take the piss because I'm a fucking Rappist,
go ahead and attempt a diss, your weapons disarmed and dismissed,
your buttons don't do shit, forced to make like a duck and just sit.
So, Yames eh, that's your name? Okay, no need to explain,
Maybe you were raised in a sheltered way, scared of the letter "J",
eating Yello yigglers while watching Yames Bond yump out a plane,
full of yoy and yubilance, yog back home Yames.

Good luck, man.

So, Yames eh, that's your name? Okay, no need to explain,
Maybe you were raised in a sheltered way, scared of the letter "J",
eating Yello yigglers while watching Yames Bond yump out a plane,
full of yoy and yubilance, yog back home Yames.

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

But yo.. both of ya'll did hella fucking good! props to both.

lmao that last bits clownin as fuck

nice stuff guys

Okay I listen to both tracks and one thing I wana say to get it out there is you guys could have came way harder with disses. I mean both of your tracks hardly have anything hard in them. I like both of them but the disses were weak on both ends.

Quality - The quality of both tracks was nice. I think TheRappists voice was kinda low but I enjoyed it.

Disses - Both of you hardly came with any disses. You guys need to come hard as fuck. Make your whole verse disses, easy. I need to give this to someone so Yames got this cuz he had more. Rappist had them in his last 4 lines.

Flow/Delivery - Both of you had good flow and delivery but I think Yames had it more cuz his was smooth. Rappist seemed as if he was trying to rush it at points which is never good.

Not too much more I can say about this other then both of you need to come harder.

Overall Vote - Yames

^^ Keep in Mind, the battles are going into this blind, Thats why I set the rules for hardest bars and stuff, on this round, One

both were straight....pretty even match up...gonna be a tough one fa' da Judgez!

HoLLaz

I appreciate the honest criticism, Buzzkill...
I guess all I can say is that it's kinda hard to fill the full verse with disses when you don't know much about them beyond their name.

Not hard at all if you can come up with clever punchlines. Has nothing to do with personal shots. Both of could have easily filled your 16s with clever punchline disses. Most dudes in live battles get 24hrs notice and spit hard bars all through.

Dang haha Both had nice entries. Overall, I think Yames takes this one. Ya'll both had great lines but I think Yames killed it with his delivery. Keep killin' it dudes.

Yames owned this, hands down. that rapist line had me lol.

Mr. Morder is sick though.

hah thanks guys

Ha, cool shit...I appreciate the comments, looks like I should've put the disses higher up on my list...looks like doing something different is working against me so far...

I should explain better.

Both songs were great imo, the only reason I considered Yames' had a bit of advantage, was because a few of his lines hit a little harder. Mr. Morder had great lyrics, and the flow & voice really caught my attention. Both great artists.

Awesome battle again, Yames had a really basic scheme, while The Rappist seemed to add alot more complexity. Yames had a better delivery , I wasnt a huge fan of The Rappists but lyrically, Yames didnt stand a chance..

Rappist showed a great use of vocabulary, and his last 4 bars killed it, though next round he might want to step it up.

Good battle on both ends.. My vote goes to
The Rappist

AnxietyState wrote:I should explain better.

Both songs were great imo, the only reason I considered Yames' had a bit of advantage, was because a few of his lines hit a little harder. Mr. Morder had great lyrics, and the flow & voice really caught my attention. Both great artists.

i agree with this. The vote is not in, but this is my feed for this battle, Yames flow was smoother and he had solid lines, the last 4 bars of the rappist verse were illin. You guys have put up some hella battles in the first round. This was one of the best first round battles to me even tho there were some other great ones. I think with personally info and personal disses this still woulda been a very good battle. Your both very differnet emcees with unique styles. I hope you guys continue to post here and help become the backbone of the community and examples for others even tho one person will not make it past this round. I will be back with the more official vots later this evening. Thank You.